We were learning about how to write and find information for our Chinese New Year report.
I found it easy to Get the bibliography with using copy and paste.
I found it challenging to put full stops because didn't know when to put them.
Next time I will not chat to my friends because it stopped me from doing my mahi.
Hi Jethro
ReplyDeleteI like how you added lots of words to put detail to your writing but on slide 3 you put thousand of years ago the chines would pray you could of Chinese people pray but good work
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ReplyDeleteKia ora jethro,
ReplyDeletei really enjoyed the part were you mention that a dragon would attack villages and hundreds of people at time.
next time i encourage you to add a heading to each slide so we know which slide has the imfomation that we need.
From Houston,M
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Jethro,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the part when you told us when the Chinese New Year starts, It shows how you really researched and looked into your topic.
When I read your post I learnt that the Chinese New Year is called the Lunar New Year.
Maybe next time you could have a little tittle by each of your sentences so it’s easier for the reader to know what their learning and reading about.
From Grace.M
Hello jethro ko denim ahoe i really like how you talk about the chinese new year i found out so much info about your writing maybe next time change the background from Denim.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Jethro i like the why you add so much detail to the work that you have done keep it up BY Denim
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